1. My favorite days is are my birthday, Christmas and New Year's day.
> Instead of repeating the phrase "my favorite day..." let's combine your sentences since they have the same ideas.
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Sally,
Those are also my favorite days! I love Christmas the most, though. I am excited to eat together with my family tomorrow night.
I hope that you will also share happiness with your family tomorrow!
Merry Christmas Sally!
-teacher Cindy