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작성자 : tgv***   ·   2014-12-23

The whale is the digest ocean animal.
The cup-shaped leaves trap insects.
we have hair.
The red wood tree is amazing that it is the tallest tree.
refflesia is wide.
The insects fall in to the pitcher plant.
The pilgrims landed in America.

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CORRECT SENTENCES:
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The cup-shaped leaves trap insects.
**The pilgrims landed in America.

VERY GOOD!!             


                   ===CORRECTIONS===


Do Yuon: The whale is the digest ocean animal.
Correct: The whale is the biggest ocean animal.
EXPLANATION: The usage of the "digest" in the sentence is wrong since the meaning of it is "to change food in your stomach into substances that your body can use". The word "biggest" is much more appropriate.

Example sentence for the word "digest":
** Our body's stomach digest the food we eat.

Do Yuon: we have hair.
Correct: We have hairs.
EXPLANATION: Don't forget to capitalize the initial word in a sentence and to pluralized the words with two or more in the idea.

Do Yuon: The red wood tree is amazing that it is the tallest tree.
Correct: The red wood tree is amazing because it is the tallest tree in the world.
EXPLANATION: Use Conjunctions (a word that is used to connect phrases or parts of a sentence) for your sentences. For example, the words 'and' and 'because' are conjunctions.

Do Yuon: refflesia is wide.
Correct: The rafflesia flower is wide.
EXPLANATION: ARTICLES plays an important role in a sentence for they emphasize the subject or the direct object. Use A for initial consonant letters or sounds, An for initial consonant letters or sounds and The for specific words or proper nouns. You should also be careful about your word spellings.


Do Yuon: The insects fall in to the pitcher plant.
Correct: The insects fall into the pitcher plant.
EXPLANATION: The usage of the word "into" means "towards the inside or middle of something" which much more appropriate for this sentence.

                                ===NOTES===

Hello Do Yuon! Thank you for submitting your homework today!  Great job! Just keep on practing the correction being made in here. You're doing great now! I'll see you next meeting. Bye^^ Take Care. ~Teacher Carrie

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