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작성자 : sky***   ·   2014-12-22

I played monster high with chloe.We made high school . The most popular student was Lagoona.And we voted for prom queen.It was lots of fun.

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I played Monster High with Chloe. We built a school. The most popular student was Lagoona. And we voted for as prom queen. I was a lot of fun.

*Monster High is a brand name and should always be capitalized. They're proper nouns. Chloe is a proper noun - proper nouns are written in capital letters regardless of where they appear in a sentence. Build means to make something by putting materials and parts together (He built his own house).

Good job Claire. I am hoping you will write more next time.

Teacher Jhen :)

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