***CORRECTED COMPOSITION***
Who are you? I am Daniel.
Where are you from? I'm from Denmark.
When did you brush your teeth? A week ago.
Why are you sleeping durning class? ZZZ
How did you get out from jail? I escaped.
What did you get for Chrismas? I got a book.
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Student: A week ago.
Correct: I brushed my teeth a week ago.
EXPLANATION:
>It's much better if you answer in complete sentences, but I have to admit Daniel, you made me laugh there. ^^
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Student: Why are you sleeping durning class? ZZZ
Correct: Why are you sleeping during class? I'm tired.
EXPLANATION:
>Just check your spelling. You misspelled DURING, you spelled it durning.
>Again, it's much better if you answer in complete sentences.
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Student: I escaped.
Correct: I escaped from jail.
EXPLANATION:
>It's much better to answer in complete sentences.
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Hello Daniel! This is the corrected composition. Thank you for always passing it on time and you've improved more. Keep it up. I just noticed that instead of answering in phrases, it's better to answer in complete sentences. So far, you're really great! Keep it up and see you on Wednesday! ^^
Love and hugs,
Teacher Kathline :)