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My favorite activity
작성자 : col*** · 2014-12-19
1. I like flying a kite.
2. I like riding a bike.
3. I like climb up a wall.
4. I like playing basketball.
5. I like playing baseball.
Teacher I'm done ^*^
2. I like riding a bike.
3. I like climb up a wall.
4. I like playing basketball.
5. I like playing baseball.
Teacher I'm done ^*^
답변
Hello, Colin! Wow, you're quick in passing your homework! Thank you for passing it. For the
minor corrections, kindly review them below.
My Favorite Activities
Explanation:
In writing the title of a topic, the beginning letters of the words should be in capital letters.
Since you have several favorite activities, we should write the plural form of activity, which
is activities.
3. I like climbing up a wall.
Explanation:
As with your other favorite activities, we should add -ing with the word climb because it
functions as a gerund.
I see you're active, Colin! You do many interesting outdoor activities. I wish I knew how to
fly a kite, too! You did a good job in making the sentences. Keep it up! I'll see you in class,
Colin!
~ Teacher Mary
minor corrections, kindly review them below.
My Favorite Activities
Explanation:
In writing the title of a topic, the beginning letters of the words should be in capital letters.
Since you have several favorite activities, we should write the plural form of activity, which
is activities.
3. I like climbing up a wall.
Explanation:
As with your other favorite activities, we should add -ing with the word climb because it
functions as a gerund.
I see you're active, Colin! You do many interesting outdoor activities. I wish I knew how to
fly a kite, too! You did a good job in making the sentences. Keep it up! I'll see you in class,
Colin!
~ Teacher Mary