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작성자 : shi*** · 2014-12-19
2. exacerbate > It exacerbrate the girl's cold.
3. eczema > I really hate eczema. It is Itchy.
4. crux > The doctor was finding the crux of that ill.
5. dehydration > Dyhydration is usually happen in winter,
6. vulnerable > Children are vulnerable.
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Student : I need to withstand this winter.
Explanation : CORRECT! ☺
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Student : It exacerbrate the girl's cold.
Correct : The girl's cold exacerbated.
Explanation : It is better to write your sentence this way. It can convey your sentence better.
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Student : I really hate eczema. It is Itchy.
Explanation : CORRECT! ☺
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Student : The doctor was finding the crux of that ill.
Correct : The doctor was finding the crux of that illness.
Explanation : We need to use 'illness' here because it is a noun and I think you are referring to this one. "Ill' is an adjective.
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Student : Dyhydration is usually happen in winter,
Correct : Dehydration usually happens in winter.
Explanation : Be careful of your spelling 'dehydration'. There is no need to put the be-verb 'is' in this sentence because the verb 'happens' is more appropriate.
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Student : Children are vulnerable.
Correct : Children are vulnerable to sickness.
Explanation : I added 'to sickness' here to make your sentence more understandable and to make it complete.
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Hi Julie! Happy Friday!!! Again, you did a great job with your homework. I'm happy you did your homework eventhough you don't feel well today. With that attitude Julie, I know you will be a great English speaker in the future. Happy weekend!
~Teacher Louise 