ALICE: From:your friend hayun
CORRECT: From: Your friend Hayun
EXPLANATION: Always remember Alice that we should always start the first word in a sentence with a big letter.
Moreover, a proper noun (NAME OF PERSON, PLACE OR THING), always starts with big letter.

ALICE: To:sujin
CORRECT: To: Sujin
EXPLANATION: A proper noun (NAME OF PERSON, PLACE OR THING), always starts with big letter.

ALICE: comig my birthday!!
CORRECT: Come to my birthday!!
EXPLANATION: Always remember Alice that we should always start the first word in a sentence with a big letter.
Remember that you are trying to invite your friend.

ALICE: Hi!sujin~Today was my birthday!
CORRECT:  Hi! Sujin~ Today was my birthday!
EXPLANATION: A proper noun (NAME OF PERSON, PLACE OR THING), always starts with big letter. Don't forget to put space between two words.

ALICE: I wants your coming my birthday.
CORRECT: I want you to come to my birthday.
EXPLANATION: Always remember Alice that the pronoun "I" takes both singular and plural verb. When it comes to the action verbs, it takes plural one (ex. I play basketball). Otherwise, when it comes to be verbs, it takes singular one (ex. I was there last night).
Also, I want you to insert to, because you are trying to invite your friend to your party.

ALICE: we are playing together! I think my birthday was really funny!!
CORRECT: We are playing together! I think my birthday is really funny!!
EXPLANATION: Always remember Alice that we should always start the first word in a sentence with a big letter.
Your birthday is just coming, it's not yet done. It is correct to use "is" rather than "was".

ALICE: And,we eat delicious food.
CORRECT: And, we eat delicious food.
EXPLANATION: Don't forget to put space between two words.

When:2014.December.19th CORRECT

ALICE: Where:my house
CORRECT: Where: My house
EXPLANATION: Always remember Alice that we should always start the first word in a sentence with a big letter.
Don't forget to put space between two words.

COMMENT:

Hi Alice! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I know that you wouldn't fail to do it. Please take note and study the corrections that I wrote. Thank you again!

~~ Teacher Angeline