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작성자 : yej***   ·   2014-12-16

I hate history.
Beacuse it's hard.
And it can't move.
But P.E can move.
history is trash!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Student: I hate history.
Beacuse it's hard.
And it can't move.
But P.E can move.
history is trash!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Correct: I hate history because it's hard and you can't move but in P.E, you can move. History is trash!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Explanation: Please check your spelling. Also, your sentences can be formed into one sentence. We use the preposition "in" is used to indicate inclusion, location or position within something. Lastly, "History" is a proper noun.

***************TEACHER'S COMMENT*************

Hello, Yejun! Thank you for submitting your homework. Please check your correction. Next time, please give effort constructing your sentence. I know that you can do it.

Have a good night! See you on Thursday!

- Teacher Claire

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