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Student: My farvorite application is Naver.
Correct: My favorite application is Naver.

Explanation: Please check your spelling.
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Student: I think naver is really good. Because when I used naver, I can find many things.
Correct: I think Naver is really good because when I used Naver, I can find many things.

Explanation: "Naver" is a proper noun. The PRESENT TENSE is used to describe actions that are factual or habitual. 
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Student: I found about minecraft always.
Correct: I find things about Minecraft always.

Explanation: It's better to construct your sentence this way. "Minecraft" is a proper noun.
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Student: If I used naver, I can found information about minecraft easliy.
So I used Naver always.
Correct: If I used naver, I can find information about Minecraft easliy so I always use Naver.

Explanation: It's better to construct your sentence this way. "Minecraft" is a proper noun. The PRESENT TENSE is used to describe actions that are factual or habitual. 
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Student: Also I can watched webtoon. The naver webtoon is very fun.
Correct: Also, I can watched webtoon. The Naver webtoon is very funny.

Explanation:  The PRESENT TENSE is used to describe actions that are factual or habitual. 
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Student: Because there are a lot of webtoon so I like it.
Correct: I like it because there are a lot of webtoons.

Explanation: It's better to construct your sentence this way.
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Student: When I used naver I can download a lot of application.
Correct:When I used Naver I can download a lot of applications
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Student: Like this example I think Naver is really great application.
Correct: Like this example, I think Naver is a really great application.

******************TEACHER'S COMMENT*************************

Hello, Lina!

Thank you so much for submitting your homework and also sharing your love for Minecraft. Pplease check your corrections and take note of your common mistakes. I'll see you again tomorrow, have a great night!

- Teacher Claire