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Student: It was on last week. I fought with my brother, because of juice.
Correct: It was on last week, I fought with my brother because of juice.
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Student: We were played with the toys and we've got some apple juice.
Correct: We were played with the toys and we have some apple juice.
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Student: Then my brother told me that mine is more than his.
Correct: CORRECT!
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Student: So I said 'NO" than we just fought.
Correct: So I said ''NO",then we just fought.

Explanation: "Then" is often used to situate actions in time. "Than" is for comparing.
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*************TEACHER'S COMMENT****************

Hello, Julie! Thank you so much for submitting your homework. Please check your corrections. I'll be seeing you again on Wednesday. Have a great night!

- Teacher Claire