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작성자 : had***   ·   2014-12-15

We can't be a fish because if we are fish, people catch us and they eat us.There is not enough food in the ocean. So we can die. And the ocean is dangerous.

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We can't be a fish because if we are fish, people catch us and they eat us. There is not enough food in the ocean. So we can die. And the ocean is dangerous.

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We can't be a fish because if we will, people will catch us and they'll eat us.   
There is not enough food in the ocean. So we can die. And the ocean is dangerous.

Thank you for doing your homework, Eric. It was good and you have a point. ^^ Always try to share your knowledge in the class and always try to answer some questions in your book that will make your mind more active. 

See you on Wednesday and take care always.

~Teacher Cassie 

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