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Student : Dogs are usually friendly so we can keep being nice friends.
Correct : Dogs are usually friendly so we can keep being nice friends with them.
Explanation : I added 'with them here to make the sentence thought complete.
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Student : Arang was really
trusty andExplanation : The word 'really' is removed is removed because you already said it in the first statement thus, putting it there makes it redundant.
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Student : However, It had become the day I really hated.
Correct : However, the day that I really hated came.
Explanation : I just fixed your sentence construction in here for it to be understood better.
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Student : I was not sure I could visit again. So I told him about it.
Correct : I was not sure I could visit again so, I told him about it.
Explanation : I made your sentences into one because the second sentence supports the first one.
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Student : He was really sad that he followed me through cars.
Correct : He was really sad that he followed me through the car.
Explanation : The article 'the' is placed before a noun.
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Student : I hard that this winter vacation, I could meet Arang and my cousin again!!!
Correct : I heard that this winter vacation I could meet Arang and my cousin again!
Explanation : Please be careful with your spelling.
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Student : I am glad I think I would not say that I will go back to home This time. For him. For Arang to be happy and wait for me another month.
Correct : I am glad because I think I will not have to say to him that I will go back home this time so that Arang will be happy and will wait for me for another month.
Explanation : I made your 3 sentences into one because they support each other and the others doesn't have a complete thought thus making them a fragment not a sentence. We use 'will' for things that will happen in the future.
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Hi Julie! I'm happy that you will get to see Arang again. I want to see him, too. Can you take a picture of him and show it to me during our class? I hope you can have your own pet, too because I know that you really wanted to have one. For your assignment, you did another wonderful job and continue doing a great job. I'll see you again tomorrow!
~Teacher Louise ![]()