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작성자 : ppo***   ·   2014-12-11

I want to put up a business.
But It will be very hard.
Many people wants to be a business man.
And I want also..

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I want to put up a business but it will be very hard.
Many people wants to be a businessmen and I want to be one also..

> "but" is a word that expresses a contradicting ideas to one mentioned prior to it and we usually don't separate them. Using it to begin a sentence creates a dependent clause.

> People is plural; therefore, you should use the plural from of your verb.

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