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작성자 : dai***   ·   2014-12-12

english= English is very fun to me.

Science= science is very cool and fun.

math= Math is little bit hard to me .

P.E= Every body likes to do P.E but Im not sure.

arts= The girls like to do arts.

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CORRECTIONS:

Daine: English is very fun to me.
Correct: English is very fun for me.

Daine: Math is little bit hard to me .
Correct: Math is little bit hard for me .

Explanation: We use the preposition "FOR" in the interest of; on behalf of: to act for a client.

Daine: science is very cool and fun.
Correct: Science is very cool and fun.
Explanation: Always make sure that your sentences starts with a CAPITALIZED letter.

Daine: Every body likes to do P.E but Im not sure.
Correct: Everybody likes to do P.E., but I'm not sure.
            I'm not sure if everybody likes to do P.E.
Explanation: PUNCTUATIONS are very important in your sentences because helps bring the right kind of expression into writing for which voice intonation, volume, tone, pauses are used while speaking.

Daine: The girls like to do arts.
Correct: The girls like to do art activities.
Explanation: Let's be more specific in our sentences to add emphasize and more ideas.


Hello Daine! Thank you for submitting your homework! Keep on studying and please do remember the grammar rules in order for youto apply it correctly in your own sentences. Thank you! ~Teacher Carrie ^^

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