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작성자 : shi*** · 2014-12-12
mishap - I have a mishap about this event today
sinkholes - Oh my!! There was a sinkhole in the tower!!!
affiliates - She affiliated with the fashon team.
skyscraper - This is the most tall skyscraper.!
dispute - It was a dipute wich our class had done.
boost - It really was a boost ride. I naever want a ride on it agian.
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Student :The accident plagued everyone
Correct : The accident plagued everyone.
Explanation : Don't forget to put a period after your sentence.
Student : I have a mishap about this event today
Correct : I have a mishap about this event today.
Explanation :Don't forget to put a period after your sentence. You may also say your sentence like this, I have a mishap about today's event.
Student : Oh my!! There was a sinkhole in the tower!!!
Correct : Oh my! There is a sinkhole in the tower!
Explanation : I removed your excess exclamation point because just one will be enough. I think your sentence is still in the present tense that is why we should use 'is' instead of 'was'.
Student : She affiliated with the fashon team.
Correct : She is affiliated with the fashion team.
Explanation : Be careful with the spelling of 'fashion' and you are missing a be-verb here which is 'is'.
Student : This is the most tall skyscraper.!
Correct : This is the tallest skyscraper.!
Explanation : The superlative for of 'tall' is 'tallest' not 'most tall' that is why it is better to use 'tallest' in this sentence.
Student : It was a dipute wich our class had done.
Correct : There was a dispute between our class and the other class.
Explanation : 'Dispute' means to have an argument with another. Your sentence is lacking someone to that your class has an argument with that is why I reconstructed your sentence. ☺
Student : It really was a boost ride. I naever want a ride on it again.
Correct : It was really a boost ride. I never want to ride on it again.
Explanation : The verb 'was' should go before the adverb 'really'. Please have a review on places of adverbs. Please be careful with your spelling of 'never' and 'again'.
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Hi Julie! Thank you for submitting your homework. I'm happy that you are enjoying having homeworks. This is good because aside from enhancing your English speaking skills, you are also enhancing your English writing skills. Keep it up! I'll wait for your next homework. Happy weekend!
~Teacher Louise 