Nicole:The real homwork is about my first flight, but I can't remember it.
Correct: The real homework is about my first flight, but I can't remember it.

Nicole: So I just write about the most interesting flight.
Correct: So I will just write about the most interesting flight.

Nicole:It was last year. I went to another country with my freinds in gifted school
Correct:  It was last year. I went to another country with my friends in gifted school.
EXPLANATION:

Be mindful of the correct spelling of words.

Nicole: We went to Hongkong and China.
Correct: We went to Hong Kong and China.

Nicole: When the airplane take off, it was really beautiful.
Correct: When the airplane took off, it was really beautiful.
EXPLANATION:

Please be careful when applying the past of the verb.

Nicole: All houses are so small. And I did games with freinds
Correct: All houses were so small.  I also played games with my friends.

a. Avoid using conjunctions like BUT, AND, BECAUSE as the first word in a sentence because we use conjunctions to connect an incomplete thought to a complete one.

b. Be mindful of the correct spelling of words.

Nicole:So it was really special for me. I will go again on January!!!yeah!!
Correct: So it was really special for me. I will go again in January!!!yeah!!
EXPLANATION:

We use the preposition 'on' for specific dates like January 24, December 25 while we use the preposition 'in' for months like in January, in December.

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Hello, Nicole! Great work! Kindly take note of the corrections. Thank you for submitting your homework.

-Teacher Isabel