I think my friends or parents hold me back from doing something that I want to do. For example, when I want to do something in festival, my friend didn't want to do it so I gave up. It looked very fun but if I do whatever I want, my friend might feel bad. So I did what my friend wanted to do. Second, my mom often said 'no' when I wanted to listen to music doing homework and reading books. It is hard to ignore my mom's 'command' so I gave up again. Later, my mom said that listening to mom (or older people) will bring better result. I can't understand what that means but I think I will realize when I grow up.

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I think my friends or parents hold me back from doing something that I want to do. For example, when I want to do something in festival, my friend didn't want to do it so I gave up. It looked very fun but if I do whatever I want, my friend might feel bad. So I did what my friend wanted to do. Second, my mom often said, "no" when I wanted to listen to music while I'm doing my homework or reading a book. It is hard to ignore my mom's 'command' so I gave up again.  Later, my mom said that listening to her (or older people) will bring a better result. I can't understand what does she mean but I will realize it as I a grow old.

Reminders:

> While is use when we are doing two or more things at the same time.
> You can use pronoun to your sentences to avoid the using the same word/ noun.
> Kindly review you articles.
> We use will to state a situation that could happen in the future.