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Student: I don't like going to the hospital. Because I think the hospital is awful place.
Correct: I don't like going to the hospital because I think the hospital is an awful place.

Explanation: You can combine your two sentences.
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Student: When I was third grade I hurt my chin.
Correct: CORRECT!

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Student: I had to treatment so I went to the hostital.
Correct: I had to put on treatment so I went to the hospital.

Explanation: "put on" is placed to show action. Please check your spelling.
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Student: Then the doctor said " You must took stitches to close up the wound"
Correct: Then the doctor said, "You must have stitches to close up the wound."

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Student: I felt very afraid. I struggled, but It's no use struggling and wriggling.
Correct: I felt very afraid, I struggled, but it's no use struggling and wriggling.

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Student: Finally It took eight stitches to close up the wound.
Correct: Finally, it took eight stitches to close up the wound.

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Student: So far I don't like anesthesia. Because when I took stitches to close up the wound.
Correct: So far, I don't like anesthesia because I need to have it before they stitch the wound.

Explanation: It would be better to construct your sentence like this.
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Student: The doctor gave me a shoted of an anesthetic.
Correct:The doctor gave me a shoted of an anesthetic.

Explanation: "shot" is already the past tense.
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Student: When he shoted of an anesthetic I felt pain.
Correct: When he shoted of an anesthetic I felt pain.

Explanation:
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Student: Also I hate the smell of hospital specially dentist.
Correct: Also, I hate the smell of hospital, especially dentist.

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Student: I went to dentist every month because of braces
Correct: I go to the dentist every month because of my braces.

ExplanationThe PRESENT TENSE is used to describe actions that are factual or habitual. Use the article THE before a specific noun.
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Student: When I went to dentist, I hate dentist. Because I think the smell of dentist is very bad.
Correct: When I go to the dentist, I hate it because I think the smell of the clinic is very bad.

Explanation: Use the article THE before a specific noun. Then we use the pronoun "it" to avoid repetition. "Clinic" is a better term to use to identify the place.
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Student: Also there are noise when used equipment.
Correct: Also, there are noises when equipment are used.

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Student: Like these reason, I don't like going to the hospital.
Correct: These are some of the reasons why I don't like going to the hospital.

Explanation: You can construct your sentence like this.
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**************TEACHER'S COMMENT***************

Hello, Lina!

Thank you so much for submitting your homework and also the story why you hate going to the hospital. Next time, don't be afraid to go to the hospital because they will make you feel better when you're feeling sick. :)

Please check your corrections. I'm looking forward to see more of your works. I'll see you again tomorrow. Have a great night!

- Teacher Claire