A: How was your weekend?
B: I spend time with my cousins. It was fun! On Saturday, we went hiking. Suddenly, my cousin screamed! An angry bear slowly came toward us. I was chicken out. But I made up my mind. I threw the small rock several times. At last, the bear run away!! We all laughed.
A: Wow! That was amazing! I wish I want to try that.
B: Next time, I will go with you to that mountain.
A: Thanks.

Correct:

A: How was your weekend?
B: I spend time with my cousins. It was fun! On Saturday, we went hiking. Suddenly, my cousin screamed! An angry bear slowly came toward us. I was chickened out. But I made up my mind. I threw the small rock several times. At last, the bear run away!! We all laughed.
A: Wow! That was amazing! I wish I want to try that.
B: Next time, I will go with you to that mountain.
A: Thanks.

Hello Woohyun! Thank you for submitting your homework on Talk Fun. I have seen improvement to your composition. You were able to use the idioms that we have learned from the unit. You also followed the rules in punctuations and capitalization. Keep it up! Just remember about the verb tenses, (past tense) especially when your retell stories in the past. I hope to see you again in our class!