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Make sentens

작성자 : 197***   ·   2014-12-11

1.Korea's tradition food is kim chi.
2.Last year 's my birsday present is LEGO.
3.Korea's tradition costume is Han bog
4.I decorate a christ mas tree.
5. In halloween, I say my teacher to trick-or-treat.

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Student: Korea's tradition food is kim chi.
Correct: Korea's traditional food is Kim Chi.

Explanation: The word that you need to use s "tradition", but if you will construct your sentence this way, you should say "traditional".
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Student: Last year 's my birsday present is LEGO.
Correct: Last year my birthday present is LEGO.

Explanation: Please check your spelling.
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Student: Korea's tradition costume is Han bog
Correct: Korea's traditional costume is Han bog

Explanation: The word that you need to use s "tradition", but if you will construct your sentence this way, you should say "traditional".
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Student: I decorate a christ mas tree.
Correct: I decorate a Christmas tree.

Explanation: Please check your spelling.
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Student: In halloween, I say my teacher to trick-or-treat.
Correct: In Halloween, I say to my teacher, to "trick-or-treat."

Explanation: Halloween is a proper noun so you need to capitalize the first letter. The preposition "to" is used to show direction.
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************TEACHER'S COMMENT*************

Hello, Adriano! Thank you so much for submitting your homework. You did a good job. Keep it up. Please check your corrections, mostly are spelling corrections. I know that you can do it next time. I'll see you again on Tuesday!

Have a great weekend.

- Teacher Claire

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