Dear Teacher Jhen,
My favorite fictional charecter is probably Percy Jackson. Do you know him? He's from <Percy Jackson and the Olympians>.I like him because he asks like a normal boy, like a big stupiud grump. However, he turns out nice at the end. Also, you know I love greek gods, my favorite is either Iris or Athena or Aphrodite, maybe even Dionysus. Posiedeon's not bad either, but I get an impression he likes double dating and dumping goddesses. So, I prefer Apolo. Anyway, T.J., (sorry if you were affended) you really should try this book. I LOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE greek myths, because I started reading this book when i was 5.
Love, Chloe

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Dear Teacher Jhen,

    My favorite fictional character is probably Percy Jackson. Do you know him? He's from "Percy Jackson and the Olympians". I like him because he acts like a normal boy, like a big stupid grump. However, he turns out nice at the end. Also, you know I love Greek gods. My favorite is either Iris or Athena or Aphrodite, maybe even Dionysus. Poseidon's not bad either, but I get an impression he likes double dating and dumping goddesses. So, I prefer Apollo. Anyway, T.J., (sorry if you were offended) you really should try reading this book. I LOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE Greek myths because I started reading this book when I was 5.

Love,

Chloe

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Hi Chloe,

       It is okay!, I am not offended. Actually, I loved it! I like reading Greek mythology too before but things changed when I reached High School. I can still relate for a bit because I can still remember them. No worries at all. Thank you!

Love,

Teacher Jhen ?¾