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작성자 : yej***   ·   2014-12-09

My favorite subject is P.E.
Beacuse its fun.
And I can move.
But history can't move.
P.E. is fun!!!

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*******CORRECTIONS**********

Student: My favorite subject is P.E.
Correct: CORRECT!

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Student: Beacuse its fun. And I can move.
Correct: Because its fun and I can move.

Explanation: Please check your spelling and your sentence can be one.
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Student: But history can't move. P.E. is fun!!!
Correct: In history, we can't move. That's why P.E. is fun!!!

Explanation: You can compose your sentence this way.
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**********TEACHER'S COMMENTS************

Hi, Yejun! Thank you for submitting your homework, please always take note of your corrections and make sure that the next time you do your homework, apply it. I know that you can do it better next time. :) Keep up the good work, Yejun!

Have a great week. :)

- Teacher Claire

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