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작성자 : CHA*** · 2014-12-08
Because, I envy good speaking English have friends.
2. I want to having a pretty bard.
It's very pretty.
3. I want live very big house.
Beacuse, my fater and mather want to live very big house.
답변
CORRECT: 1. I wish to master English.
EXPLANATION:
a. Be careful with capitalization. Some of the things that we capitalize are; proper nouns, first letter of every new sentence, the pronoun "I", Titles of people followed by name, days of the week, months and holidays.
Bella: Because, I envy good speaking English have friends.
CORRECT: Because, I envy people who can speak English well because they have more friends.
EXPLANATION:
a. When describing something, say the object that you are describing first (people) before saying something about it (who can speak English well).
Bella: 2. I want to having a pretty bard.
CORRECT: 2. I want to have a pretty bird.
EXPLANATION:
a. SIMPLE PRESENT = to + base verb
PRESENT CONTINUOUS = to be + base verb+ing
b. Be careful with spelling.
Bella: It's very pretty.
CORRECT!
Bella: 3. I want live very big house.
CORRECT: 3. I want to live in a very big house.
EXPLANATION:
a. TO is used before a verb to make the infinitive.
b. When denoting a room, country or a place with physical boundary, the preposition to be used is IN.
Bella: Beacuse, my fater and mather want to live very big house.
CORRECT: Because, my father and mother want to live in a very big house.
EXPLANATION:
a. Be careful with spelling.
b. When denoting a room, country or a place with physical boundary, the preposition to be used is IN.
Hello, Bella. Thank you so much for always submitting your homework. You're doing great everyday. Study the corrections that we have in here and if you do have questions feel free to ask about it. Have a goodnight! Take care! See you! ^^
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Teacher Belle. 
