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Student: My weirdest dream is this.
Correct: My weirdest dream is this...

Explanation: You can remove the word "this" and continue your sentence
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Student: When I was little I dreamd that I was in a ghost house, and the ghosts were there.
Correct: ...when I was little, I dreamed  that I was in a ghost house and the ghosts were there.

Explanation: Please check your spelling
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Student:  And they were laughing at me. And i heard my mom and dad were screeming.
Correct:  And They were laughing at me and I heard my mom and dad were screaming.

Explanation: You make this as one sentence and please check your spelling
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Student: And they shout out."Run!!! Run away from the ghost!!!" And I woke up.
Correct: And Then, they shouted out "Run!!! Run away from the ghost!!!" suddenly, I woke up.

Explanation: "Then" and "suddenly" are good transitional words, so you will not repeat "and" again and again.
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Student: And I heard "Run!!!".........
Correct: CORRECT!

****************TEACHER'S COMMENT******************

Thank you so much Julie for submitting your homework. You did a good job. Please check your corrections. Most are about joining two clauses to make a sentence and also the spelling. Do your best on your next homework!

By the way, here's a correction on your "P.S' note:

(P.S: Sorry teacher because last Friday I was playing with my friends so I forgot the Talk fun. I'm so sorry.)

P.S. That's fine Julie, just be mindful of your time next time.

- Teacher Claire