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homework 2

작성자 : dai***   ·   2014-12-05

choclate= I like choclate very much becaush it is sweet.

lollipop= lollipop is very yummy.

jelly beans= I dont like jelly beans because it makes me sick.

cotten candy= cotten candy is little bit yummy to me.

caramel= The most I dont like sweet is caremel.

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Daine: I like choclate very much becaush it is sweet.
Correct: I like chocolate very much because it is sweet.
Explanation: Be careful with your word spellings.

Daine: lollipop is very yummy.
Correct: Lollipop is very yummy.
Explanation: Always start your sentences in capitalized letter of the first word.

Daine: I dont like jelly beans because it makes me sick.
Correct: I don't like jelly beans because they make me feel sick.
Explanation: Do not forget to put apostrophe (') with words that are contracted. Since the subject is "jelly beans" and it is in its plural form, be consistent with the use of pronouns in your sentence.

Daine: cotten candy is little bit yummy to me.
Correct: Cotton candy is little bit yummy for me.
Explanation: Be careful with spelling and word capitlaization. Use the preposition "for" which means because of.

Daine: The most I dont like sweet is caremel.
Correct: The kind of sweet that I don't like is caramel.
Explanation: Be clear with your idea and use an appropriate word for sentence. Be careful as well with the spelling.

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