**********CORRECTIONS************

Student: My favorite holiday is Gang Bog Jear.
Correct: CORRECT!

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Student: Beacause Gang Bog Jear is my country is indenpendens to japan.
Correct: Because Gang Bog Jear is my country's independence to Japan.

Explanation: Please double check your spelling. We put ('s) to show ownership. Lastly, we capitalize letter "J" in Japan because it's a proper noun.
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Student: If Gang Bog Jear was not being,i was manage to japan.
And I am japan nation.
Correct: If Gang Bog Jear did not happen, I will be part of Japanese nation.

Explanation: Your sentence did not make sense Adriano, I think it's better to write your sentence like this to make sense.
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Student: So, I like Gang Bog Jear!
Correct: CORRECT!

************TEACHER'S COMMENT************

Thank you so much Adriano for submitting your homework. Please check your corrections. It was nice knowing that Gang Bog Jear is the independence day of Korea.

I'll be seeing you again on Tuesday. Have a great weekend!

- Teacher Claire