***************Correction to Zenia's Homework******************

ZENIA: Last week, we learned about One armed basketball player.

CORRECT: Last week, we learned about the one armed basketball player.

>>> Use article THE for definite subject.

His right arm was paralyzed by a car accident when he was a child. But he didn't give up. Let me tell you about my real dream.
I want to go to Seoul University. I got this idea when I was 4 years old.

ZENIA: I thaught of this idea because my uncle went to Seoul University.

CORRECT: I thought of this idea because my uncle went to Seoul University.

>>> Be careful with the proper spelling of words.

ZENIA: I want to go to Seoul university to be a great judge.

CORRECT: I want to go to Seoul University to be a great judge.

>>> Proper nouns begin with capital letter.

This is very important for my future. I want to go to Seoul University for work.

ZENIA: This is my relastic goal.

CORRECT: This is my realistic goal.

>>> Again, be careful with the spelling. Double check your writing after you compose it.

I have to study well and won't give up. I will overcome this difficulty by thinking 'Zenia, you can do it!'
I will feel satisfied if I achieve my dream. I can study very well when I go to Seoul University. But I have to stay up late and not give up. I will not give up my dream because it is my real dream.

ZENIA: One armed basketball player didn't give up.

CORRECT: The one armed basketball player didn't give up.

>>> Like what I have mentioned above, use article THE for definite subject.

My dream is going to Seoul University. I will feel satisfied if I achieve my dream. I hope everyone will not give up.


# My dream
1. I want to go to Seoul University.
2. I want to make a book.
3. I want to be a judge.
4. I want to be famous.

ZENIA: 5. I want to go to poor people' house and help them

CORRECT: 5. I want to go to poor people's house and help them

>>>Possession should be written with 's at the end of the noun.

6. I want to be in TV.
7. I want to be good at drawing.
8. I want to be good at English.
9. I want to speak Chinese.
10. I want to be a President.

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Hi Zenia,

I am happy to read your composition today! You are so inspired to fulfill your dream. I hope that you can keep the motivation to pursue your dream. You still have a long way to go before you can achieve it so study very hard. ^_^

I wish you luck!

Always,
Teacher Serene ^_^