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Homework for Jane Teacher and GO DOWN!!

작성자 : DMM***   ·   2014-12-03

1.I have a play mate

2.It is not good to compete in the school.

3.I am too bored when I learn samething everyday.

4.I am sharing my pencil.

5.We have to be nice.


go down!!


























I love you teacher!!Thank you for teaching me!!!

go more down















I am so proud of you that you are my teacher!!!


go more,more down!















GOODBYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! See you soon!!!!!!!!!

답변

1.I have a play mate
correct: I have a playmate.
Explanation. Don't forget your period(.)
            > playmate is one word.

2.It is not good to compete in the school.
CORRECT

3.I am too bored when I learn samething everyday.
correct: I am too bored when I learn same thing everyday.


4.I am sharing my pencil.
CORRECT

5.We have to be nice.
CORRECT

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Hello my handsome Tony!!


I was so happy to read your message. I could imagine you say the phrase "GO DOWN!" Anyway, I am also happy because you are one of my students. Always keep that charm on you. Stay sweet and be responsible always. I know your a nice guy. Don't forget to check my corrections.





GOODNIGHT!!!







Teacher Jane^^

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