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Essay about my community

작성자 : woo***   ·   2014-12-03

I live in a pretty big community called Yeoung Ju.
I like Yeoung Ju becuase the air is fresh and friends are nice.
This days in Yeoung Ju the first snow came on Monday this week and today I could play with snow at school playground because playground was covered lightly in snow. Many people goes to work so there is always some people in the early morning.

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Hello WooJung,

Thank you for submitting your homework. I so happy to know this things about your community. and about the snow in Korea now. because I really want to see snow personally.. and guess what you don't have any corrections today so good job.. keep it up..^_^

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