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작성자 : j92***   ·   2014-12-03

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Hello? Julie teacher? We learned about our land and water. Many different
shapes called landforms. There are plain, mountain, hill, valley, island, and
forest. Also, There are ocean, river, and lake for bodies of water.
The water covers most of the earth's surface. Additionally, lake and river flow into the ocean.

Good bye Julie teacher! Have a good day!



Hi Jack


Thank you for doing your composition! I am happy to know that you learned a lot in our lesson for today. With regards to your grammar, please don't forget the proper capitalization and punctuations. Also, you can use different words to emphasize some of your ideas, not just "also". Take note of my corrections today and study those. See you on Friday, Jack!


Teacher Julie

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