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작성자 : ppo***   ·   2014-12-02

I want to be a cloth designer.
Because I love to design my own cloth.
So I want to be a designer.

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I want to be a cloth fashion designer because I love to design my own clothes.
So I want to be a designer.

>> "Fashion designer" is a more appropriate word for the first sentence.
>> We use "because" to make a dependent clause; thus, we can't use it as a beginning of a new sentence.
>> "Cloth" is the fabric used in making "clothes." Please take note of their difference.

 

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