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The most important thing that i don`t want to lose-homework

작성자 : ddb***   ·   2014-12-02

1.rawlings p12fs glove:It is my no.1 treasure and i gained it by getting very high score at the term test.I studied hard in order to get it.it costs 100 dollers
2.i phone 4:It is my hendphone and it is very useful when i have to call someone urgently and most of all,My mother will be very frustrated when i lose it.

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1.rawlingsp12fs glove:It is my no.1treasure and i gained it bygetting very high score atthe term test. I studied hard in order to get it.it costs 100 dollers

2.iphone 4:It is my hendphoneand it is very useful when i haveto call someone urgently and most of all,Mymother will be very frustrated wheni lose it.


CORRECT:

1. RawlingsP12FS gloves: It is my number onetreasure because I gained it bygetting a very high score on the term test. I studied hard in orderto get it. It costs 100 dollars.

2. iPhone 4:It is my hand phone and it isvery useful when I have to call someone urgently. And most of all, mymother will be very frustrated ifI lose it.


EXPLANATION:

Rawlings is proper noun - propernouns are written in capital letters regardless of where they appearin a sentence. Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.Pronoun "I" is always capitalized. Always check for anymisspelled words before submitting your work


Thank you for doing your homework as always, Dongju! Keep up the good job! See you later:)

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