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작성자 : yej***   ·   2014-12-02

My favorite flavor is chocolate.
beacus its delicious.
and its just sweet
But candys are so sweet.
choco is good

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Student: My favorite flavor is chocolate.
Correct: CORRECT!
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Student: beacus its delicious. and its just sweet
Correct: Because, it's delicious and it's just sweet.

Explanation: Please check the spelling. We use the contraction "it is", because "its" shows ownership
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Student: But candys are so sweet.
Correct: Candies are too sweet.

Explanation: The plural of candy is candies not candys. It is better to use "too" than "so".
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Student: choco is good
Correct: Choco is good.

Explanation: Start your sentence with a capital letter.
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****************TEACHER'S COMMENT*******************

Hello, Yejun!

Thank you so much for submitting your homework. Kindly check your corrections, keep up the good work. I'll be seeing you again on Thursday. Have a great week.

- Teacher Claire

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