Jenny: First,turn on the computer.
Correct: First, I turn on the computer.

Jenny: Second,go to the Naver.
Correct: Second, I go to the Naver.

>> Always remember that a complete sentence needs a subject; otherwise, it will only be a fragment or a?phrase.

Third, I go to the email and I do log in. CORRECT!
Fourth, I check the message. CORRECT!

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Hello Jenny,

Thank you for making your homework. I'm glad to see improvements on your sentences though you still have some areas to focus on. I know you will be able to work on them if you will continuously exert efforts! You can do it Jenny. :)

- teacher Cindy