I eat ice cream when on a cold day beacause ice cream is cool. I want eat ice cream.

> Please take not that we don't start a sentence with the word "BECAUSE" as it usually expresses a reason to a prior idea.

> Please check the spelling when typing to avoid misspelled words.

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Jenny,

Do you know that I also love eating ice cream? I think most Filipinos would agree with me because it's always hot in our country.

With regard to your sentences, please check the corrections and take note of them when you write your next composition.

Keep on improving Jenny! :)

- teacher Cindy^^