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작성자 : CHA*** · 2014-11-28
But some would not be enoush.
2. I want to make a friend to my bird.
And I want to make a girl friend.
He will like^o^
(I want have a $1,000,000...)
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But some would not be enoush.
Correct: I want to go on a trip abroad and play there for 7 days with my mom and dad but it's not enough.
Explanation:
a. Let's practice choosing the appropriate words in constructing your sentences. It is important for you to create a more appropriate sentence.
b. Be mindful with your spelling [WITH], [ENOUGH].
c. Avoid using conjunctions such as AND, BUT and BECAUSE as first word of a sentence.
d. Study the use of punctuation marks [.].
Bella: I want to make a friend to my bird.
And I want to make a girl friend.
Correct: I want my bird to have a friend and I want it to be a girl. / I want my bird to have a friend and it's a girl.
Explanation: Avoid using conjunctions such as AND, BUT and BECAUSE as first word of a sentence.
Bella: He will like^o^
Correct: He will like it.
Explanation: It - used as the subject of a verb, or the object of a verb or preposition, to refer to a thing, animal, situation, or idea that has already been mentioned.
Bella: (I want have a $1,000,000...)
Correct: (I want to have $1,000,000...)
Explanation: TO - used as a function word to indicate purpose, intention, tendency, result, or end / used as a function word to indicate the result of an action or a process.
Hello, Bella! Thank you so much for submitting your homework. Please study the corrections that we have in here and if you do have questions feel free to ask about it. Have a goodnight! See you on Monday! Take care always! ^^
Love,
Teacher Belle.
