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작성자 : bed***   ·   2014-11-30

I went to church on sunday.
It was very fun
because I played my best freind!!
I played phone game.
It's a non sense quiz.
so next sundy I want to go to church again.

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Jennifer: I went to church on sunday.
Correction: I went to church on Sunday.

Explantion:

*Capitalize the names of days, months, holidays, and special days of observation.

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Jennifer: It was very fun because I played my best freind!!
Correction: It was very fun because I played with my best friend.

Explanation:

*Use a period (.) at the end of a sentence that makes a statement.

*Use an exclamation point (!) at the end of a sentence to express strong emotion.

*Conjunction are words used as joiners.


*Be mindful of the correct spelling of the words that you used.

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Jennifer: I played phone game.
Correction: I played games on my phone.

Explanation:

*The sentence was rephrase.

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Jennifer: It's a non sense quiz so next sundy I want to go to church again.
Correction: We had a quiz but its not very hard so on Sunday I will go to church again.

Explanation:

*Be mindful of the correct spelling and capitalize the names of the days.

*The sentence was rephrase.

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Hi Jennifer,

I'm very happy that you enjoyed your weekend. I hope that you will have an awesome week ahead! Remember the correction. See you!

Teacher Ella

 


 

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