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make a list about my school rules

작성자 : woo***   ·   2014-11-28

In my school, we have rules:
1. Do not run in the hallways
2. Do not run in the classroom
3. Do not yell in the classroom or hallways
4. Do not fight or punch
5.Do not use phone in the school untill teacher allows you

This is what I remember.

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Hello Woojung,

Thank you for submitting your homework. I know that you follow all of these rules cause your a good student..

Please  take notes of my correction..

In my school, we have rules:
1. Do not run in the hallways -Correct
2. Do not run in the classroom -Correct
3. Do not yell in the classroom or hallways -Correct
4. Do not fight or punch -Correct
5.Do not use phone in the school untill teacher allows you
  Correct: Do not use phone unless the teacher allows you.

** Instead of until use "unless" to mean "except if".

** The definite article THE is used before singular and plural nouns when the noun is specific or particular.

This is what I remember.

Correct: Those are what I remember.

**Always remember the rule of Subject Verb Agreement. It is said that a singular subject should be followed by a singular verb and a plural subject should be followed by a plural verb.

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