Hi Chloe ?¾,

        Thank you very much for submitting your homework. I will forward seeing your parents on Christmas. I hope I could also send a gift for you too.

Here are some things we still have to improve on:

My favorite holiday is Christmas. Why? I love it because of the snow, the magical feeling in the air, and my favorite, presents! I get more presents at Christmas than my birthday 'cause I am in Korea! All my family sends presents, and this year I'm looking foward to a special gift- I'll show you on christmas! I hope I can get a christmas tree too...one that's 6meters tall!

Great job Chloe!~ *clap clap clap You just have to be careful on your spelling and capitalization. Remmeber that if it is a proper noun it always start with a capital letter. If only I have a lot of money to buy you a 6m tall Christmas tree, I will buy it for you, but we don't have Christmas tree at home too. :)

Teacher Jhen ?¾