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작성자 : CHA*** · 2014-11-26
I practiced dance.
And the daace is good.
My friends looking our dance today.
the group peoples is four peoples.
My friends give to the clap for us.
I'm happy!
I'm very happy today!!!^ㅁ^
답변
I practiced dance.
And the daace is good.
Correct: I like to dance. / I like dancing.
I practiced dancing and it's good.
Explanation: Study the - ing form of the verb. The ?ing form can be used like a noun, like an adjective or like a verb. Also, study infinitive - TO + VERB = INFINITIVE this can be used as a nouns, adjectives or adverbs. Don't start a sentence with conjunctions - this is a joiner, a word that connects the parts of sentences. Be mindful with your spelling [DANCE].
Bella: My friends looking our dance today.
Correct: My friends watched our dance today.
Explanation: The action was already done so it should be in the past form of the verb.
Bella: the group peoples is four peoples.
Correct: There were four people in each group. / There were four people in our group.
Explanation: The sentence was rephrased.
Bella: My friends give to the clap for us.
Correct: My friends clapped for us.
Explanation: The action was already done so it should be in the past form of the verb.
Hello, Bella! Thank you so much for submitting your homework. You're doing great everyday! Study the corrections that we have in here and don't hesitate to ask if you have questions. See you! Have a goodnight! Take care always! ^^
Love,
Teacher Belle. 
