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I am good citezen!

작성자 : 197***   ·   2014-11-26

I am good citezen!
Beacause I'm griting to neibors.
I don't throw trash in street.
I keep order.
I love neibors.
I help unfortunate neibors

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***************CORRECTION****************

Student: I am good citezen!
Correct: I am a good citizen!

Explanation: The indefinite article "a" refers to a particular or certain one of a class or group. Please check your spelling.
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Student: Beacause I'm griting to neibors.
Correct: Beacause I'm greeting to neighbors.

Explanation: Please check your spelling.
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Student: I don't throw trash in street.
Correct: I don't throw trash on the street.

Explanation: The preposition "on" is used when referring to the surface of something.
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Student: I keep order.
Correct: I keep things in order.

Explanation: It is better to say it this way to support "what will you keep in order".
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Student: I love neibors.
Correct: I love neighbors.

Explanation:  Please check your spelling.
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Student: I help unfortunate neibors
Correct: I help unfortunate neighbors.

Explanation: Please check your spelling.
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*************TEACHER'S COMMENT*************

Hello, Adriano! Wow, you really are a good citizen. Most of your mistakes are about spelling. Whenever you do your homework, always consult the dictionary to avoid mistakes. Okay? Please check your corrections.

I'll see you tomorrow. Thank you for submitting your homework.

- Teacher Claire

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