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homework to Ella teacher

작성자 : bed***   ·   2014-11-26

My hobby is watching books.
Especially, reading book of magic reader.
beacause that book is fun!!
so my hobby is very fun~~
Do you like that too??

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***********************CORRECTION************************

Jennifer: My hobby is watching books.
Correction: My hobby is reading books.

Explanation:

Remember the difference of watching ang reading:

*watching- to look at something for a period of time.

*reading- the skill or activity of getting information from written words.

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Jennifer: Especially, reading book of magic reader.
             beacause that book is fun!!
Correction: I usually read books about magic because its fun.
                I think my hobby is very good.

Explanation:

*The sentence was rephrase.

*Be mindful of the correct spelling of the words that you used.

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Jennifer: Do you like that too??
Correction: Do you like reading too?

Explanation:

*Be mindful of the proper verb, adjective or noun that you will use to describe things or situations so that people will understand what you mean.

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Hi Jennifer,

I'm glad that you were able to submit your homework. Just remember the correction and explanations  i've made. Reading is my hobby too. Have you read Harry Potter books? Have a great day!

Teacher Ella

 

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