*******CORRECTION*********

Student: I like sweets. But I don't eat much.
Correct: I like sweets but I don't eat that much.

Explanation: "but" cannot be used as a first word in a sentence.
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Student: Beacuse I's not good tp my body.
Correct: Because it's not good for my body.

Explanation: Please check your spelling. The preposition "for" is used to express a purpose.
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Student: It has verry sweet things. And bad things
Correct: It has so many sugar and bad things.

Explanation: "sugar" is the correct term to use than "sweet things"
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****TEACHER'S COMMENT******

Hello, Yejun! Thank you so much for submitting your homework. I know that you hate writing/typing so much. I am really happy that you tried. Please check your spelling and corrections.

I'll see you again on Thursday! Have a great day.

- Teacher Claire