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작성자 : f72***   ·   2014-11-25

I love my country. because im nation at korea
and i have to protect my country.

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I love my country. because imnation at korea
and ihave to protect my country.

CORRECT: I love my country because I'm a citizen of Korea.

I have to protect my country.


>>'because' is a conjunction used to connect phrases andparts of a sentence. We don't usually begin a sentence with aconjunction (and, because). Citizen means someone who lives in aparticular town, city or country. To refer to a country, we use thepreposition 'in'. 'of' is a preposition to refer to possession ofsomeone or something/ relating to someone or something. Pronoun 'I'is always in capital case.


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Hi William,

              You did a good job. I'm glad that you were able to do and submit your homework again. Just keep on writing English compositions so that your writing and grammar skills would be enhance. See you in our next class. Have a great day ahead!^*^

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