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Garage sale is good or bad?

작성자 : jay***   ·   2014-11-24

I have a topic... Garage sale is good or bad?.. I think good. That's beacause garage sale makes our neighborhood more close.. It will be good.. thing. Close each other.. When we closed each other thwy will help when our family is dangerous and difficult situation.. So i think garage sale is good. I want to make our home garage sale place... It will be fun!! But we don't have yard.. so we don't do.. It was bad..

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I have a topic... (I have a topic.) 

Garage sale is good or bad?.. (It's about having a garage sale good or bad?)

I think good. (I think it's good.) 

That's beacause garage sale makes our neighborhood more close.. (That's because having a garage sale makes our neighborhood become closer.)

It will be good.. thing. Close each other.. (It will be a good thing to get close with each other.)

When we closed each other thwy will help when our family is dangerous and difficult situation.. ( When we get close to them they will help our family in dangerous and difficult situations.) 

So i think garage sale is good. (So I think having a garage sale is good.)

I want to make our home garage sale place... (I want to have a garage sale in our home.)

It will be fun!! But we don't have yard.. (It will be fun but we don't have a yard.)

so we don't do.. (So we can't do it.)

It was bad.. (It's a bad thing.)


*It's (with an apostrophe in front of the s) is a contraction of "it is" or occasionally "it has." The apostrophe in it's is a mark of omission, not possession.

*Be mindful of the correct spelling of the words.

*"Have" is one of the most common verbs in the English language. It functions in various ways. The forms of the verb "to have" are have and has for the present and had for the past.

*A period (.) is put at the end of a sentence.

*Pronoun 'I' is used when the person speaking or writing is the subject of the verb.


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Hi Jayden,

                      I'm glad that you were able to submit your homework on time. Please do study the corrections and explanations I've given and apply it the next time you're going to write a composition again. See you in our next class. Have a wonderful evening!^*^

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