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Jennifer: In the weekend I went to the downtown
I bought a phone case, my clothes and my hair band.
and then I was very hungry, so I went to the restaurant .
I ate bean sprouts soup with rice.
I thought next time I want to go to downtown.

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Correction: Last weekend, I went to the downtown and bought phone case, clothes and hair band.
And then I was hungry so I went to the restaurant.
I ate bean sprouts soup with rice.
I was thinking of going to the downtown again.
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Explanation:

*Capitalize the first letter of your sentence.

*Be mindful of the proper verb, adjective or noun that you will use to describe things or situations so that people will understand what you mean.

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***************** TEACHER'S COMMENT******************

Hi Jennifer,

Thank you for submitting your homework. I'm glad that you enjoyed your weekend. I'm looking forward to a more fun-filled story of the things you do every weekend. Good job.

-Teacher Ella.