************CORRECTION*************

Student: I played with my friends at home.
Correct: CORRECT!
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Student: my friends is horrified by crocodile.
Correct: My friends are horrified by the crocodile.

Explanation: Please capitalize the first letter of your sentence. We use "are" because "friends" is plural. Use the article THE before a specific noun.
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Student: When my friend saw cockroach she run away.
Correct: When my friend saw a cockroach she ran away.

Explanation: The sentence is PAST TENSE. The indefinite article "a" refers to a particular or certain one of a class or group thing: a man; a chemical; a house.
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Student: When i fought with my friend i just turn over when my friend talking.
Correct: When I fought with my friend, I just turned over when my friend was talking.

Explanation: The sentence is PAST TENSE.
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Student: It is best to take a nap between 1p.m and 3p.m.
Correct: CORRECT!
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************TEACHER'S COMMENT***************

Hello, Julie!

Good job. Thank you for submitting your homework. Please rest and I am really excited to see you again on Friday. Kindly check your corrections and practice them.

Have a great day!

-Teacher Claire