Tim's homework:

We had a tournament and then took 3rd place! So now we are practicing skills. For our team formation we are using 3-2-3 formation I am Left foward I scored 4 goals in our tournament. The happything is Me and one 8th grader is MVP in our school!

Tim: We had a tournament and then took 3rd place!
Correct: We had a tournament and then we took 3rd place.

Tim: So now we are practicing skills.
Correct: So now we are practicing our skills.

Tim:  I am Left foward.
Correct: I'm at left forward.

Tim: The happything is Me and one 8th grader is MVP in our school!
Correct: The happy thing is me and one of the 8th graders got the MVP award in our school. / The happything is one of the 8th graders and I were the MVP in our school.

Comments: I haven't congratulated you yet for being one of the MVP's in your school. Well, congratulations! No wonder, Tim you've got this award; You are such a very good and intelligent student. Just keep up all the good work, Tim! God bless!