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작성자 : min***   ·   2014-11-20

Maiz Runner

Do you like adventurous movie?
Then you will love Maiz Runner
It is a movie about escape from Maiz
The main characters are Thomas, Teurisa, Gally, Newt and Minho
It is a thrilling movie.
I like scean that Thomas and Minho find the exit of Maiz and escape from the maiz. I don't like a scean that greevers kill people.
My favorite character is Thamas because he is brave.
I recommend this movie to people who like adventurous and thrilling movie.
Boys might like it more than girls.

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Maiz Maze Runner

Do you like an adventurous movie?
Then you will love Maiz Maze Runner
It is a The movie about how to escape from the Maiz maze
The main characters are Thomas, Teurisa Teresa Agnes, Gally, Newt and Minho It is a thrilling movie. I like scean scene that Thomas and Minho find found the exit of Maiz maze and escape from the maiz maze. I don't like the a scean scene that where greevers gladers kill people.
My favorite character is Thamas Thomas because he is brave.
I recommend this movie to people who like likes adventurous and thrilling movie. Boys might like it more than girls.

    ===============Correction/s==================

Nate: Maiz Runner
Corrected Sentence: Maze Runner

>>If you are not sure with your spelling try to check the spelling in the dictionary.

Nate: Do you like adventurous movie?
Corrected Sentence:Do you like an adventurous movie?

>> Do not forget to put articles in your sentences. There are one 3 articles that you can use to complete the sentence A, AN and THE. Use A if the next word is with a consonant letter. AN if the next word is a vowel. Same as THE.

Nate: Then you will love Maiz Runner
Corrected Sentence: Then you will love  Maze Runner

>> Again, if you  are not sure with your spelling you can always check it in the dictionary.

Nate: It is a movie about escape from Maiz
Corrected Sentence: The movie about how to escape from the maze

>> When we use the words "how to" it only means the process of doing one thing.

Nate: The main characters are Thomas, Teurisa, Gally, Newt and Minho
Corrected Sentence: The main characters are Thomas, Teresa Agnes, Gally, Newt and Minho It is a thrilling movie.

>>This is a good sentence, but I think you got Teresa Agnes's name spelled mistakenly.

Nate:  like scean that Thomas and Minho find the exit of Maiz and escape from the maiz.
Corrected Sentence: I like scene that Thomas and Minho  found the exit of  maze and escape from the  maze.

>> You misspelled the words MAZE and SCENE. We should use the word found because it was already in the past.

Nate: I don't like a scean that greevers kill people.
Corrected Sentence: I don't like the  scene  where  gladers kill people.

>>It's good to know that you were using articles to fill in your sentence, but the article you used is not appropriate for the sentence.

Nate: My favorite character is Thamas because he is brave.
Corrected Sentence: My favorite character is Thamas Thomas because he is brave.

>>You just misspelled Thomas's name.

Nate: I recommend this movie to people who like adventurous and thrilling movie.
Corrected Sentence: I recommend this movie to people who  likes adventurous and thrilling movie.

>>So here since you were the one who is recommending the movie and the subject is singular the verb should also be in singular form. LIKES is in singular form.

        ===============COMMENT/S=================

Nate, wow you really liked the movie. I can see that if I will let you summarize or tell me something about the movie you will surely get it. Good job! However, there are some misspelled words and also some grammar lapses especially the verb usage. But we can work on that. I will give you exercises that will surely enhance your spelling , pronunciation and vocabularies. In that way you will be able to make your own sentences. Take care!

-Teacher Iza

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