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작성자 : CHA***   ·   2014-11-19

I if the fruit,want to be a strawberries.
Because,It is delicious and pretty.
(I like it^^)

I if the fruit,want to be an apples.
Because,many Korea people like apples.

I if the fruit,want to be a lemon.
Because, I like color yellow!
I like this fruit

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Bella: I if the fruit,want to be a strawberries.
Because,It is delicious and pretty.
Correct: If I would be a fruit, I wanted to be a strawberry because it's delicious and it looks good.
Explanation: The question is in second conditional. The response should be in second conditional. Don't begin a sentence with 'because'. Conjunction 'because' connects two phrases together.




Bella: I if the fruit,want to be an apples.
Because,many Korea people like apples.
Correct: If I would be a fruit, I wanted to be an apple because Koreans like apples.
Explanation: The question is in second conditional. The response should be in second conditional. Don't begin a sentence with 'because'. Conjunction 'because' connects two phrases together. KOREAN - belonging to or relating to North or South Korea, their people, or their language.




Bella: I if the fruit,want to be a lemon.
Because, I like color yellow!
I like this fruit
Correct: If I would be a fruit, I wanted to be a lemon because I like yellow! I like this fruit.
Explanation: The question is in second conditional. The response should be in second conditional. Don't begin a sentence with 'because'. Conjunction 'because' connects two phrases together. Don't forget the use of punctuation marks like period [.].




Hello, Bella! Thank you so much for submitting your homework. Study the corrections that we have in here. If you do have questions feel free to ask it in our class. Have a goodnight. Take care always! ^^





Love,
Teacher Belle.

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